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题目特征:
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一些人认为……
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整体结构
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写作步骤
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   firecrackers     ban firecrackers紫金香6W]#X&Ba NC*a-I_p
   tradition                     pollution
5NZ0K"Xf!a.j6i0   celebrate         money consuming紫金香-Cn*rA G
   beautiful                     not safe
w Gttvb0   good memories            resources
&St:~ L#CL0   communication             traffic 

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i+gZc q1^.q)L0(1) 话题引入紫金香ZgGp j,~0gkF2\;D
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 _______ is (something/a process/a kind of substance/animal)紫金香 g%l&o~e3A
that/to/of ________.

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Dog is an animal that calls “Wang! Cai!”
Pe$Q']'Q%l0Dog is an animal that people take it as a pet all around the world.

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A teacher is someone who input knowledge into students’ minds.

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W ^&f(Y!?+h%io0Firecrackers are the great invention of ancient Chinese to dispel ghosts and embrace the coming of a new year.紫金香uG2?(~ZM)L5N7\!W

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Reading is a process of obtaining gist information. However, whether to read selectively or extensively has aroused heated discussion among the public.

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4r*s7n"n&EC,vw0Opportunity is something that everybody yearn for through their life.紫金香m }W+l+b/Tzj

4|,iX2ts mV sCT0A test of spoken English is a test to access students’ ability to express themselves orally.

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Lucky numbers are numbers that to bring good luck to people.
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8y^:Lk_0+the (problem/issue) whether to do or to do  in contemporary society.紫金香:y|(P"y#`n

B.A1LT^|#MlHH0There is a public controversy about the problem whether to set firecrackers or not during Spring Festivals.紫金香Z+O'g-u$S1B,d"_Ap

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There is a public debate over the issue whether to read extensively or selectively.
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A heated discussion whether to set firecrackers or not is in the air nowadays.紫金香.E#outr}+L

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A heated discussion whether to read selectively or extensively is in the air nowadays.

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A heated discussion whether a test of spoken English is necessary is in the air nowadays.

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To do sth or not to do sth. That is the question.

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As to whether to do or to do, there is no agreement among the public.

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\1k^/A,kKQ0As to whether to watch Spring Festival Gala on the eve of a new year,  there is no agreement among the public.
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During my college years, I work as a private tutor to support myself financially. I have learned a lot through this working experience. 紫金香ek x b ?2xL

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Some college students have gone through the same experience with me and argue that students should take a part time job for the reason that it can not only to help them pay for  their tuition, but also make a lot of friends.紫金香 e5b&R JW(y I(eZ&v$l

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DNa|8z{7v"J*`1xd0Along the street I caught sight of the car of my next-door neighbor’s. With full gratefulness I begged my neighbor to take my friend to the hospital. My roommate was saved in time because of the car.紫金香'W8K T@1F

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If you do not have such experience, you would never know how important a car is to your life.

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排比反问式
i~lTx0Some students like to have outdoor activities. Others like indoor activities. Which do you prefer?

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r2lo3W&^$V3g7z0Have you ever been to the West Lake in Hangzhou city? Have you ever walked along the Long Corridor in the Summer Palace? Have you ever seen the red fallen leaves on the fragrance Hill?紫金香3?r a)j4^4p.nq
(2) 一种观点+原因
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The notion that _______ is supported/ favored by some-______ due to the fact that________ .紫金香,nk8Y;q\&w~/c s*t,E
The idea that ______ is condemned by some people considering the fact that___.

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Some people frown at the idea that ____.紫金香(NFf[d4`rH
Their dissatisfaction can be directly traced back to the fact that __________.紫金香2l h+I6K1P;Z

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The majority of Chinese argue that firecrackers should not be banned during festivals for the reason that it is a Chinese tradition. And it should be preserved  by themselves as well as their offspring.紫金香#yT5S+s o"|X

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They are already overwhelmed by their coursework and assigned research project.

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2UN y;zr.E%IHpV|o0Job-hopping is favored by some graduates due to the fact that they tend to learn more from different working experience.紫金香@7u P5} }s

F@Z Q];T0As a result, these new working experiences, in turn, also make them feel excited about their lives.

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Also, they contend that it might be unsafe for students to work outside the campus.紫金香;a,Qm5q'Ci
另一种观点
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Tastes differ. Others may oppose to this idea. Their opposition arises from the fact that _____.紫金香 D y&F!H:I
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8jC$\6g? Wi0However, others take the opposite stand. They maintain that extensive reading is a better way to gain knowledge. Their opinion may have roots in the consideration that it would broaden students’ horizon. Even in some cases, students might gain a lot by reading books that they did not intend to.

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Tastes differ. Others may oppose to job-hopping. Their opposition arises from the fact that royalty is always one of employers’ considerations when they are recruiting.紫金香&Do0uz*r[

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L~;d c],lsB$Y0Personally speaking, firecrackers should not be banned. I just can not imagine what the Spring Festivals would look like without the sparks of firecrackers. Life would look boring in that way.

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From my point of view, reading selectively can make our study more effectively and efficiently. On the contrary, reading extensively is time consuming.
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Thus, I am determined to spare no efforts to do something.紫金香W@;l%e@2A)F
Hence, I decide to try the utmost to __
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建议
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I strongly recommend that__

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I strongly recommended that we could plant trees to settle the pollution caused by firecrackers.

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"F!o U5p#MS7v*l0Have you ever feel embarrassed when you encounter a foreigner? Have you ever got stuck in face-to-face communication with English speakers? 紫金香@1\#@7n%hp.pnI

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Have you ever wished to find one to practice oral English with you? If you had such experience, you would realize how important oral English is to your lives.

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         Therefore, some scholars propose to add a spoken English test to college English Test? They argue that it can stimulate students to practice oral English in a more intensive way.紫金香Wk[*| [:IX

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p%sF.b5T/y0 After analyzing the pros and cons of this test, I concede its benefits outweighs its drawbacks. We can access our English level through this test. It can guide us to learn oral English well. 紫金香0R,@&[C1gp

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问题解决型
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      原因(2)
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观点引入紫金香v&{Uum4C/t
1. China Daily presented us a thought-provoking fact on June 1,2007 that____.
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3. A report conducted by a certain news agency came to us that____________.紫金香"bQ e(b1i&x
4. According to the recent survey conducted by a certain official organization,________
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1.% of ____ do sth紫金香c{ d2y.f)~j^o*j e
2._____人 do sth紫金香 E9h$q#W%]v'k k%k
3. the number of ___has increased/decreased by % from __to____.
c TGiXn04. the loss caused by ______has amounted to _____dollars by this January.

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This problem is triggered by several factors.________/, such as___________.紫金香$ID!UO|+s,?
Why this problem become so widespread is that ______________________.紫金香*q7x/s8G!L} I:r&ETdv&_
This problem occurs for_________.
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原因
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趋势
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If this situation remains unsolved, it will exert great influences on people’s lives, if not consciously.
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If we let the situation go as it is , It would certainly exert  a negative/positive effect on our society.紫金香/f6f:F(P0R%l~j9Z

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解决段
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头部替换
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In order to tackle this problem, we can take two measures.紫金香$W6W:BE x W0Q

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It’s imperative for us to take severe measures to put it on hold.
F,L/jB$a1?o0What measures should be taken to arrest and reverse this grave situation?

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头部替换
*Iu2P^Z\0To overcome this difficulty, it’s necessary to take effective steps to reverse the disturbing trend shown in the pictures.
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Although the drive to fight against it is a long-standing and tremendous one, our joint efforts will eventually pay off. 紫金香n#`sj&h$d`3[p
I assume that happy and brilliant future is awaiting us if we exert every effort to it.紫金香+_7]1J*VpNC$[Q;^

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W|;H_2v5c"N0Many options still exist, and human beings can still have a bright future.
8E:Z%a OqVS#}0Only in this way can we have a bright future.
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9@8l3H P9xNR:?0二、原因(1)
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      趋势句紫金香"[ys[(^8ar#xs
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       决心

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2、All the factors stated above lead us to the conclusion that__
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决心
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As a result, I set up my mind to do sth to my full capacity.紫金香7S(I1Gn-F0p LM

/j C&J^[l{s0观点论证型紫金香;Z {gLo,z4q
第一段(1) 引出话题紫金香X7n2pY1d*[ {2B[
         (2) 我的观点
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          (2)原因
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